I think the compositional design works for this style of illustration. I agree with placing it a little higher on the page and the nice negative space on the bottom for the title.
I think this is one of the more charming of all of them. it's got a pleasing color scheme and I'm still in love with the idea of it in general. I think punching the value a little to separate it from the background would be fantastic and would really polish it.
This is a fun illustration. To me the focal point was the balloon part itself but I wanted to see more of the workings inside the basket, maybe have them be larger.
I think the compositional design works for this style of illustration. I agree with placing it a little higher on the page and the nice negative space on the bottom for the title.
ReplyDeleteI think this is one of the more charming of all of them. it's got a pleasing color scheme and I'm still in love with the idea of it in general. I think punching the value a little to separate it from the background would be fantastic and would really polish it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a fun illustration. To me the focal point was the balloon part itself but I wanted to see more of the workings inside the basket, maybe have them be larger.
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